~ Haiku ~ ~ Haiku ~
Fragile heart, cripples
with a touch of feather
but it’s hard to mend!
But it’s hard to mend
a formidable self, hurt
with gossamer stabs
— Sangeeta Mishra
Shared With: Haiku Horizons, Prompt: ‘mend’
A Haiku is a Japanese poem traditionally comprising of seventeen syllables, in three lines of ‘five’, ‘seven’, and ‘five’, which evokes natural images.
Gossamer stabs…Ah!
Only time can heal may be.
Yes Indrani, indeed!Thanks !
Some wounds are yes, hard to mend
Yes, indeed. Thanks Swati! 🙂
It is really very hard to mend. A great poem on betrayal.
Rightly said Purba! Thank a lot that you liked it! 🙂
Lovely! Sometimes, it’s impossible to mend 🙂
Thank you so much Anmol. Yes, true that! 🙂
True, hard to mend..beautifully expressed.
Thank you so much Roma. Ghad that you liked it. 🙂
Great Poetical Lines.. Nicely expressed!
Thank you so much Mr. Bhattram. Means a lot when comes from you. 🙂
Deceit and betrayal have become common place and on many an occasion, we do feel the emotions so beautifully portrayed here in this Haiku!
Thank you so much Sunita. Glad that you liked them. 🙂
Awesome Haiku.
Cheers,
Sriram & Krithiga
Thank you so much Sriram & Krithiga! Cheers !
Nice poem. Very good.
Thank you so much Rupam. 🙂
That is a sad piece. Beautifully written
Yes, it’s the sad reality of life! Thanks!
So true the words are…nice haiku…:-)
Thank you so much Maniparna. 🙂
Nicely done.
Thank you so much.