Betrayal: Haiku

betrayal mend

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betrayal mend


~ Haiku ~                                                                                                                                                                   ~ Haiku ~


Fragile heart, cripples
with a touch of feather
but it’s hard to mend!

But it’s hard to mend
a formidable self, hurt
with gossamer stabs

Sangeeta Mishra


Shared With: Haiku Horizons, Prompt: ‘mend’

Haiku is a Japanese poem traditionally comprising of seventeen syllables, in three lines of ‘five’, ‘seven’, and ‘five’, which evokes natural images.

  • Gossamer stabs…Ah!

  • Indrani

    Only time can heal may be.

  • Some wounds are yes, hard to mend

  • Purba Chakraborty

    It is really very hard to mend. A great poem on betrayal.

  • Lovely! Sometimes, it’s impossible to mend 🙂

  • True, hard to mend..beautifully expressed.

  • sreedhar Bhattaram

    Great Poetical Lines.. Nicely expressed!

    • Thank you so much Mr. Bhattram. Means a lot when comes from you. 🙂

  • sunita

    Deceit and betrayal have become common place and on many an occasion, we do feel the emotions so beautifully portrayed here in this Haiku!

  • Awesome Haiku.

    Sriram & Krithiga

  • Nice poem. Very good.

  • That is a sad piece. Beautifully written

  • So true the words are…nice haiku…:-)

  • Reading Pleasure

    Nicely done.