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Between the lines…

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between the lines


I am the unreadable between the lines,
The brew to turn you into the finest wines
The strength to push you towards whites
The restraint to stop you step into black with my advice


As I stand the grey between the shades,
To protect you from falling grades
To segregate and drink the venom of water
To inhale the poison that lies in the air or wherever.


To absorb the radiation of the space,
Would readily get burns from fire with solace.
I won’t allow you to step into the black for a while
As I am the grey, the unsung reality of your life!


  • Rakesh Pandey

    Wow! You have a way with words, Sangeetaji! Poetry takes a different and potent shape in your hands! Loved the concept of the unsung effect, which toils in the background, unseen, so that the world can see the glory!

    • Thank you so much Rakeshji ! Don’t how I missed thank you here, but as always your comments are one the best reasons for me to revisit my old posts. Means a lot. Thanks again. 🙂

  • Really impressive one

  • This is so powerful; whichever way I read it 🙂

  • wow loved this one too. You are good in both hindi n english poetry. 🙂

    • Thank you so much Roohi. Your appreciation means a lot. I’m really honored that you like my poetry. 🙂

  • Admirable beyond all doubt 🙂 Can feel it <3

    • Thank you so much Roma. Your appreciation means a lot. 🙂

  • Brilliant Sangeetha, I am big believer in the great areas and the subjectivities of life. The objective aspect keeps life so plain and brings in the judgemental aspect in it which I believe is completely wrong (For once i am being objective here 😀 ). I really like how you have brought this through. Nice one 🙂

    • Thank you so much Vinay. I’m puzzled watching your insight in each and every aspect of life. How you show your expertise in tech as well as emotional front is really commendable. It feels great being appreciated by you. Thanks. 🙂

  • May all find such unsung reality in life, 🙂

  • So much of tenderness. Lovely poem.

  • Avinash Mishra

    Superb Ma’am 🙂

    It describes care for family. Loved it.

    • Thank you so much Avinash. Yes, Love for the family is the core of the poem. Glad that you liked it. 🙂

  • Nice read!

  • Purba Chakraborty

    Powerful as well as vulnerable. That’s what love makes us.
    Such depth in the 3 verses. Loved it to the core, Ma’am 🙂

    • Thank you so much Purba. Glad that you liked it. Love you lots & God bless. 🙂

  • OMG – that’s such a beautiful expression Sangeetaji 🙂
    I better look for the unsung reality of my life in good time 🙂

    • Haha, Thank you so much Archana. Well, count me too in those good times of yours 🙂

  • Beautiful

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