उपहार: A Birthday Gift for You!

उपहार: A Birthday Gift for You!


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Happy Birthday Sunshine! 🙂

What could I gift you on this Birthday as all what belongs to me is yours. Apart from all the love, care, concern and time, I have a treasure of words for you. Here they go…

Team TSS Woman

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सर्द   हवाओं  में  साँसों  की  गर्मी  भर  दूँ ,
शुष्क ऋतुओं  में आंसुओं की नमी  तर दूँ |

स्वयं करूँ मैं अपना ही अस्तित्व तार-तार,
कि पा सको तुम विलक्षण व्यक्तित्व बेशुमार |

मुट्ठी  में  बंद कर  लूँ  मैं अहम्  व  स्वाभिमान ,
कि मिल सके तुम्हें भी एक स्वछन्द आसमान |

आँखों से  चुन  लूँ आँसू, फूलों से चुन लूँ  कांटे,
चमके तुम्हारी आँखें,  महके  तुम्हारी  साँसें |

अब तुमको और क्या दूँ, दामन है मेरा खाली,
कुछ  शब्द, भावनाएं, बस  मैं  हूँ  देने  वाली !

रातों   को  जाग  बुन  लूँ  सितारों  के  महल,
बस  चाँद  तोड़ लाने  कि  तुम  करो  पहल |

— संगीता

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Dear Mum,

I messed up the room while deciding my birthday dress,

but you arranged everything with no extra stress…

Despite my tantrums that wasted your time I kept yelling at you to get ready,

but you still remained calm and kept me steady…

Throughout the day I remained busy attending phone calls,

but decorating even the entire house didn’t take you on toll…

I was complaining dad’s absence every time

while you were trying to make my every moment special with your presence so divine…

And…while You painstakingly dedicated your love & blessings through this poem for me after framing it whole night,

I simply ignored it while thanking my friends first, was that right? 🙁

I am sorry Mum for always overlooking the sacrifices that you’ve done for me throughout your life just to make me a better person every fine day. You are certainly the last person I am thanking after my Birthday, but definitely the FIRST person in my life who has made me what I am today. I owe you my everything! <3 ‪#‎ILoveYou‬ ‪#‎PlsForgiveMe‬ :'(

Maitreni


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33 comments

Happy Belated Birthday, Maitreni. Loved both the version of poetry. You and Sangeeta Ji seems more like a friend than mother and daughter. May all your wishes come true! 🙂

As they say – there is no better gift than words. Loved the hindi one. Too good, Maitreni 🙂

मुट्ठी में बंद कर लूँ अहम् व स्वाभिमान ,

कि मिल सके तुम्हें, स्वछन्द आसमान |

आँखों से चुन लूँ आँसू, फूलों से चुन लूँ कांटे

चमके तुम्हारी आँखें, महके तुम्हारी साँसें |
swagat !!

Sangeeta Ma’am, such emotional and beautiful words you have weaved with your heart that this poetry is looking like a painting of love and blessings.
And Maitreni, I loved the way you thanked your mother. So so so sweet! :-*

Awww, thanks Purba. Your comments are way beyond mere praises and appreciations as they touch my heart straight away. TSS is lucky enough to have a valuable reader like you and I personally feel blessed being connected with you. Love and hugs. 🙂 <3

Maitreni.. It happens with all of us.. We certainly fail to express our love for the ones who matter the most.. But don’t feel low my dear.. She already knows how much she matters to you and she’ll definitely forgive you.. God bless 🙂

Truly said Deeshani. Mothers could never stay angry with kids for long, even I can’t help it. 🙂

Awww that is so sweet Ma’am..! And the best gift a mother could give to her daughter.. A beautiful token of love indeed! 🙂

Thank you Deeshani. It’s indeed heartwarming being appreciated by youngsters, specially you. 🙂

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