Happy Birthday Sunshine! 🙂
What could I gift you on this Birthday as all what belongs to me is yours. Apart from all the love, care, concern and time, I have a treasure of words for you. Here they go…
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सर्द हवाओं में साँसों की गर्मी भर दूँ ,
शुष्क ऋतुओं में आंसुओं की नमी तर दूँ |
स्वयं करूँ मैं अपना ही अस्तित्व तार-तार,
कि पा सको तुम विलक्षण व्यक्तित्व बेशुमार |
मुट्ठी में बंद कर लूँ मैं अहम् व स्वाभिमान ,
कि मिल सके तुम्हें भी एक स्वछन्द आसमान |
आँखों से चुन लूँ आँसू, फूलों से चुन लूँ कांटे,
चमके तुम्हारी आँखें, महके तुम्हारी साँसें |
अब तुमको और क्या दूँ, दामन है मेरा खाली,
कुछ शब्द, भावनाएं, बस मैं हूँ देने वाली !
रातों को जाग बुन लूँ सितारों के महल,
बस चाँद तोड़ लाने कि तुम करो पहल |
— संगीता
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Dear Sangeeta ji & Maitreni, I always love reading your poetic compositions. 🙂 God bless your togetherness and common love for “words”.
Aww thank you so much dear.. and we luv u too <3
Very truly said dear. Thank you so much for your wishes! 🙂
Happy Belated Birthday, Maitreni. Loved both the version of poetry. You and Sangeeta Ji seems more like a friend than mother and daughter. May all your wishes come true! 🙂
Thank you so much Ravish. Again we both missed you on TSS :-P. You are absolutely correct. We are not mom-daughter duo but bff’s 🙂
Aww! belated birthday wishes and hugs to you, Maitreni. 🙂
Thank you so much dearie! XOXO :*
As they say – there is no better gift than words. Loved the hindi one. Too good, Maitreni 🙂
So very well said..Thanks a ton dear Saru 🙂
Thank you so much Saru. 🙂
मुट्ठी में बंद कर लूँ अहम् व स्वाभिमान ,
कि मिल सके तुम्हें, स्वछन्द आसमान |
आँखों से चुन लूँ आँसू, फूलों से चुन लूँ कांटे
चमके तुम्हारी आँखें, महके तुम्हारी साँसें |
swagat !!
Thank you so much. 🙂
Loved this to the last line! Great display of emotions with right words.
Thank you Indrani 🙂
Thank you so much Indrani. 🙂
Superb!
thanks 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Sangeeta Ma’am, such emotional and beautiful words you have weaved with your heart that this poetry is looking like a painting of love and blessings.
And Maitreni, I loved the way you thanked your mother. So so so sweet! :-*
Thank you so much dear Purba <3
Awww, thanks Purba. Your comments are way beyond mere praises and appreciations as they touch my heart straight away. TSS is lucky enough to have a valuable reader like you and I personally feel blessed being connected with you. Love and hugs. 🙂 <3
Maitreni.. It happens with all of us.. We certainly fail to express our love for the ones who matter the most.. But don’t feel low my dear.. She already knows how much she matters to you and she’ll definitely forgive you.. God bless 🙂
She was overwhelmed and yes she did. Thank you so much for all the motivation, love & support Deeshani ^_^ Means a lot when it comes from you! <3
Truly said Deeshani. Mothers could never stay angry with kids for long, even I can’t help it. 🙂
..Wow and a befitting expression of gratitude too!
Thank you so much for read & beautiful appreciation :’)
That’s a lovely birthday gift..yup a treasure Sangeeta.:-)
Thank you so much Somali. Mean a lot. 🙂
Awww that is so sweet Ma’am..! And the best gift a mother could give to her daughter.. A beautiful token of love indeed! 🙂
Thank you Deeshani. It’s indeed heartwarming being appreciated by youngsters, specially you. 🙂
simply awesome 🙂 god bless you both 🙂
Thank u dearie <3
Thank you so much Archana. 🙂