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धुरी और परिपथ

धुरी और परिपथ

पृथ्वी का घूमना अपनी धुरी पर
या फिर एक निश्चित परिपथ में
परिक्रमा सूर्य की,
— विज्ञान के इस सत्य को
जीने की नियति है मेरी भी
अपनी अस्मिता की तलाश में
आत्मकेन्द्रित होकर
स्वयं की धुरी पर घूमना
और कर्तव्यों की आकाशगंगा में
नियति द्वारा तय
एक अज्ञात, अबूझ परिपथ पर
एक नियोजित सूर्य की
यंत्रवत परिक्रमा
सूर्य के प्रचंड और उद्विग्न ताप में
झुलसने की विवशता
धुरी और परिपथ की दोहरी दौड़ में
अपने आंसुओं तक को
स्वेदग्रंथियों की राह
बहा देने की त्रासदी
नियति की इस विडम्बना को
झेलने का कारण है
पृथ्वी के सामान वृत्ताकार भूगोल |

— संगीता

  • wah Sangeeta….truly inspirational….ek laksh bus ek dhyay to go on the path of life! amazing 🙂

    • Thank you so much Shweta. Glad that you liked it. Means a lot. 🙂

  • ब्रह्मांडे पिंडे, पिंडे ब्रह्मांडे|

    यानी जो ब्रह्मांड मे है वहपिंड (शरीर) मे है | ओर जो शरीर मे है वही ब्रह्मांड मे है|

    Universal low is always same for all of us. you have presented this topic so nicely that I cant stop my self yo comment here.

    • Very well said Mr.Tarsaria. Even Aldous Huxley has stated the same—“There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that’s your own self.”

      Your appreciation means a lot. Thank you so much for stopping by and welcome to TSS. 🙂

  • Falling short of words. It’s one of your best, Sangeeta Ji. 🙂

    • Thank you so much Ravish. Your appreciation always mean the most for me. 🙂

  • I second the thoughts put by Somali and vinay. Its indeed a thought provoking poem Sangeeta.

    • Thank you so much Mr. Pasha. Your appreciation means a lot. 🙂 I too loved the insights of Somali & Vinay. Thanks.

  • I got to read a beautiful poem in hindi after a very long time ! Nice 🙂

    • Thank you so much Nazm. It’s my pleasure that you liked it. 🙂

  • Thank you so much Purba. 🙂 Your comments inspire me to write more. 🙂 <3 Love you sweety. 🙂

  • Thank you Archana. 🙂

  • Thanks Vinay. I’m surprised how beautifully you’ve summed up the whole poem in a few words. And even touched it’s vein so accurately. Loved your insight.:)

  • You have written it very well Sangeetha. I have to tweet this!

  • An amazing poetry, loved reading it Sangeetha ji 🙂

    • Thank you so much. Glad that you liked it. Thanks for stopping by. 🙂

  • Very beautifully penned Sangeeta. We are all bound to our own orbits, like the earth, our world revolves around some focal point, else we would be like shooting stars 🙂

    • Thank you so much Somali. You have summed up my poem so beautifully. 🙂

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