हसरतें: Ghazal

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कम से कम हमसे किसी को कुछ गिला तो है,
शुक्र है कि आज कोई ग़ुल खिला तो है |

माना कि इस तरफ नहीं था रुख़ हवाओं का,
एक ही सही, कोई पत्ता हिला तो है |

हमसफ़र नहीं तो क्या, तकदीर है मेरी,
बेवफ़ा भी संग, दो कदम चला तो है |

लाख खुद सितम किया, पर आपका ये दिल
दूसरे सितमगरों से कुछ जला तो है |

क्या पता था, आपकी चाहत है बेबसी,
ये नया राज़ आज ही खुला तो है |

आपने की नज़रें इनायत तो कमसे-कम,
बरसो बाद आपका एक ख़त मिला तो है |

बेघर हमारा दिल, पर हैं वो बेख़बर
दिल से दिल का आखिरी ये सिलसिला तो है ||

— संगीता

  • Vishal Grover

    Very nice poetry..the spins of words makes the entire content piece a very interesting & enjoyable read. I really like this particular line:

    माना कि इस तरफ नहीं था रुख़ हवाओं का,
    एक ही सही, कोई पत्ता हिला तो है |

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much. Your appreciation means a lot. 🙂

  • Aniruddha Shrivastava

    Good work. कुछ ख़फ़ा तो है radeef ho gaya hai. Kafiye ko thoda kas le to ye bahut hi umda ho jayega.
    Khayal bahut achha hai puri gazal me.

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Hi Annirudh,

      Thanks for pointing out. This piece was written 27 years back and I myself find it quite immature one. I like your positive criticism and would seek that help from you to correct that ‘Radeef & Qafia’ thing. This piece is a natural overflow of emotions as I’m not even aware of these terms and terminology. Thanks for stopping by. 🙂

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Now changed it to ‘कुछ जला तो है’ from ‘कुछ ख़फ़ा तो है . Hope it’s Ok now.

      • Aniruddha Shrivastava

        27 years back!!!
        Khayal bahut hi khoobsurat hai. Qafiye ka thoda bahut hi pata hai mujhe esliye likha. Ab to aapse hi kuch seekhne ko mil jayega 🙂
        Nice work.

        • Sangeeta Mishra

          Tareef ke liye bahut bahut Shukriya. 🙂

  • cifarshayar

    behetreen ghazal

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much. 🙂

  • Hey Maitreni .Sangeeta is sure an awesome writer ..beautiful

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much Kokila. Means a lot when comes from you. 🙂

  • beautiful 🙂

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much. 🙂

  • Indrani

    Reading a good one in Hindi after a long time.

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much Indrani. It feels great being appreciated by such literary people. 🙂

  • Purba Chakraborty

    The flow of the poem is like a pleasant silky breeze in summer. Soulful and meaningful words that touches the right chords. Beautiful beautiful beautiful 🙂

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much Purba. Your comments are indeed like fresh lease of life and can revamp ones dying spirits. Thanks thanks thanks. 🙂 <3

  • Bahut khub, Sangeeta Ji. Loved the attitude, emotion & presentation of poem. Appreciate the choice of words & rhythm. Thanks Maitreni for introducing a great poet, who happened to be your mother. How lucky! 🙂

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much Ravish. Appreciation means a lot when comes from you. It’s a pleasure having your comments. 🙂

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much for the appreciation Ravish. Indeed, I feel myself so lucky to have her! ^_^

    • Thank you so much for the appreciation Ravish. Indeed, I feel myself so lucky to have her! ^_^

  • Sangeeta Mishra

    Thanks Yogesh. Glad that you liked it. It’s a 27 years old poem of mine and I find it quite immature today. I’m evolved a lot since then. If this verse still appeals to you, that’s indeed my pleasure. Thanks much.

    • Yogesh Parashar

      I loved the words.
      एक से बढ़कर एक सुन्दर लफ्ज़ है।

      • Sangeeta Mishra

        Thank you. 🙂

  • This poem was written in 1988 (when I was not even born). I found it today in that old newspaper cutting and posted it without her permission. Hope she’s fine with it now! 😛

  • DEESHANI BATRA (DB)

    सुंदर कविता :))

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you Deeshani. 🙂

  • I would like to know more about Sangeeta…such beautiful composition…hats off 🙂

    • Hi Shweta, glad you liked the post. To let you know, she is my Mom, also the occasional contributor to TSS blog and part of the team. 🙂 She’s a journo and loves to blog here as well in her free time. You can read more about us here~ http://www.thestylesymphony.com/about-us-2/meet-the-team/

      Rest, she would let you know herself. Cheers 🙂

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much Shweta. You’ll get to know more of me for sure, through my write-ups and poetry, here @ The Style Symphony every now and then. Well I write for some noted news papers & magazines too as a freelancer. Thanks once again.

      • Good to know you Sangeeta and am happy that I can read your creations here. My best wishes to you and I will keep coming to read more. Thank you so so much for sharing 🙂

        • Sangeeta Mishra

          That means a lot. Thanks Shweta. 🙂

  • amazing lines Sangeetaji 🙂

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you Archana. Appreciation becomes special when comes from you.:)

  • MS Mahwar

    Very Beautiful Poem!

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much. 🙂