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Pablo Picasso lock

Pablo Picasso
Portrait de Dora Maar
Date: 28-January/1937

~ Haiku ~                                                                               ~ Haiku ~

My sap thought process,
Caged in a complex mind, so
I locked my instinct.

I lock my feelings,
Thou art possessing the key,
Ah! Please set me free.

Sangeeta Mishra

Shared with Haiku Horizons, Prompt: ‘lock’

  • Great use of lock, caged, and the motif of setting the emotions ‘free’…..

    • Thank you so much Sunaina. You have reached the core beneath the words!

  • Jyotirmoy Sarkar


  • Anjali Sengar

    Awesome 🙂

  • Saru

    You are hell of a writer. This is crisp and beautiful. Love it 🙂

    • Thank you so much Saru! You always make me feel overwhelmed with your words. 🙂

  • Rajeev Moothedath


  • Awesome it is, especially the second part 🙂

  • Amit Agarwal

    I loved the Shakespearean diction in the second haiku!

  • Beautiful poem

  • MS Mahwar


  • Pranju Chakrapani

    Deep and poignant.

  • Purba Chakraborty

    A beautiful composition with so much depth 🙂

  • bushra

    Wow! A timeless Picasso piece coupled with such beautiful words.. Such a beautiful combination! 🙂

    • Thank you so much Bushra! Glad that you liked my words. 🙂

  • Easwar Arumugam


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