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Betrayal & Love’s No More… 💔

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She won’t let it happen all over again…
Deeper the love, the bigger the pain.

It all started in a world which was, virtual,
Though it was worldly, she thought ‘twas spiritual.

Though not planned, it was proved pristine,
An alliance that turned oh-so-divine.

Demure monochrome friendship, far beyond words,
Hues struck their lives into destined love birds.

Those paths that they lead together at the start,
Are still profoundly etched, deep inside her heart.

Those cozy places they’ve gathered and rejoiced,
His company, her music and she became his voice.

His solemn wishes for his muse in the holy temple,
That promise of togetherness amidst grey hair and wrinkles.

Then everything got shunned when distances made them part,
Those shattering dreams seemed just like a falling house of cards.

Far away from him, she still kept that blindfolded trust,
His disloyalty took a toll on her, gave her a sudden thrust.

And her heart did break, her soul did spoil,
When her faith did shake into life turmoil.

He did realize and repent, he did apologize,
But by then she lost in him that friend and guide.

The uncertainty of love turned her life into a terrible tide,
And she decided to live alone taking the world in her stride.

He still woos her and she still feels special,
But his betrayal taught her love’s NOT immortal.

She won’t let it happen all over again…
Because deeper the love, the bigger the pain

— Maitreni


  • Rakesh Pandey

    A moving post, rising from a whisper of love to the crescendo of betrayal! Loved the poem!

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  • What a lovely poem this is sweetheart…loved it to the core <3


    It’s sad that everyone has to face betrayal some day in their life.. but it’s better to move on and never make the same mistake again.. this is a great post dear, loved your choice of words and the way you’ve expressed the emotions of a heartbroken girl.. I wish she never faces the same kind of pain again.. 🙂 God Bless <3 :*

    • Very truly said dear..I too wish that no girl ever faces betrayal in her life and if she does, may she attain immense courage to conquer her miseries. Thank you so much for the appreciation, I’m glad you liked it! 🙂 <3

  • Rat

    Beautiful and emotional! Loved your lines as well as your singing. Its lovely. Great post 🙂

    • Thanks a bunch Rat. I’m so glad you liked it! 🙂 Cheers!

  • And as we read through those lines, we feel her pain and totally get why she will not go there again. Very beautifully crafted, Maithreni.

    And you wowed us again with your sweet voice and song. 🙂
    Have a lovely week. 🙂

    • Thank you so much dear. I’m so elated to read your comment. Your appreciation means much. Much luv <3

  • Maitreni, you’ve penned a soul stirring poem indeed. deeper the love, bigger the pain becomes a signpost for many.

    • Thank you so much Fayaz! I’m honored that you like this post. Means a lot when it comes from you. Cheers!

  • Hello, this poem has so much of emotions <3 Last line so true! song in your voice added more to the poem <3 keep writing 🙂

    • Thank you so much Sachin. 🙂 I’m so glad you liked it. A hearty welcome to TSS 😀

  • MS Mahwar

    Very Beautifully Penned!

  • Hi Maitreni,

    Is pain always painful? Liked your voice modulations. Well, I’ll give my detail comment on your lines later. Till then you can read it:

    Have a great weekend! 🙂

    • Hi Ravish, I had a thorough read of the post and touched my your thoughts to the core. It has really taught me a lot. Thank you so much for bringing about such a worthy article (amongst all your beautiful narrations) under my reference. Could feel the vine in every word. And yes, would love to have your valuable take on this post too. Wish you too a beautiful & healthy weekend. Cheers!

  • Purba Chakraborty

    If anyone treats us wrong, then it’s just better to move on because we deserve so much better.
    You have weaved the story into a poem so perfectly and beautifully dear. Loved it <3 and the song in your voice added a magical effect to the poem.
    A great post, sweetie. Much love <3

  • Love has no endpoint. It only takes few breaks and will be back again . Very lovely poem on love, heart-touching Maitreni :):)

    • Very true that Prasanna. Thank you so much for the appreciation 🙂

  • wonderfully penned my dear girl 🙂

  • important Lessons learnt .. but that is life you win some you lose some ..

    good and bad is all here ..


  • Deeper the love, greater the pain…it’s so very true! Very nicely penned, dear… 🙂 <3

  • A lesson learnt!
    Well written.

  • So beautifully penned Maitreni. Loved it.:)

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