मंज़िलें: Ghazal

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वक़्त ने करवट बदली और आईने बदल गए,
चेहरे के शिकन बदले, ज़िन्दगी के पैमाने बदल गए |

कुछ इस तरह से हम लिखते रहे रात भर
की सुबह हुई और लफ़्ज़ों के मायने बदल गए |

मीलों चले हम अपनी हसरतों के संग-संग,
हम देखते ही रह गए और वो सामने बदल गए |

स्याही से लिखे हर्फ़, ज़िन्दगी के गीत थे,
सुर भी सजे थे, फिर भी  अफ़साने  बदल गए |

बेघर हमे किया और हुए वो बेखबर,
बेफिक्र कुछ ऐसे कि आशियाने बदल गए |

हवाओं का रूख़ मोड़ कर चलने का था जज़्बा,
पर मंज़िलों के सभी ठिकाने बदल गए ||

 

— संगीता

  • Thank you so much Rakesh ji. I know it has lots of imperfections. It’s simply the flow of emotions, not a piece of skilled writing. So, you can find lot of metre and other such flaws. And thanks a lot for guiding me to improve it.

    I’ve posted many, here on TSS, quite some time back. Most of them are quite old, written during my college days, about 25-30 years back. If you have sometime, please have a look, here
    http://www.thestylesymphony.com/category/poetry/hindi-poems/page/2/ and
    http://www.thestylesymphony.com/category/poetry/hindi-poems/.

    There are still many which I hesitate posting, as I’ve outgrown them and they seem quite childish and immature to me now.

    Looking forward to learn more from you. You are an institution. Thanks for gracing TSS. 🙂

  • each and every line of this poem is a gem… beautiful creation… kya lines hai… maza a gaya…

    कुछ इस तरह से हम लिखते रहे रात भर
    की सुबह हुई और लफ़्ज़ों के मायने बदल गए |

    bahut hi sundar…

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much Ashish. Your appreciation means a lot. Glad that someone likes Hindi / Urdu poetry in today’s era where Hindi literature is on the verge of extinction. Thanks again. 🙂

  • behad khoobsurat ! thanks for sharing dear 🙂

    • Thank you so much dear ^_^

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much Kokila 🙂

  • Bushra Muzaffar

    Ye saari koshishein besab na thi phir kyon manzilein ruswa hui…beautifully penned Sangeeta

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much Bushra. Your appreciation really means a lot. 🙂

  • MS Mahwar

    Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Kavita!

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much 🙂

  • Purba Chakraborty

    Such soulful lines. Beautiful 🙂

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much Purba 🙂

  • qwn

    वाक़ई अच्छा लिखा है आपने.

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      धन्यवाद !

  • Vishal Grover

    This is superb.. this is bookmark material.. Awesome!!

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much.Your appreciation really means a lot. 🙂

  • Kya baat hai! Kitne sundar lafzon mein andaaz ko bayaan kiya hai aapne Sangeeta.

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Dhanyawad Somali. Apke madhur shabdon ke liye anek aabhar ! 🙂

  • Amit Agarwal

    Absolutely wonderful Sangeeta! Thank you Maitreni:)

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much Amit. 🙂

  • Wow! You’re a very good poet, Sangeeta. And thanks Maitreni for sharing such beautiful lines. 🙂

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thak you so much Ravish. It feels special being appreciated by literary people like you. 🙂

  • yogi saraswat

    कुछ इस तरह से हम लिखते रहे रात भर

    की सुबह हुई और लफ़्ज़ों के मायने बदल गए |

    मीलों चले हम अपनी हसरतों के संग-संग,

    हम देखते ही रह गए और वो सामने बदल गए |

    सुन्दर अलफ़ाज़

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you so much 🙂

  • Avinash Mishra

    That’s the true reality of life.

    Super like (Y).

    • Sangeeta Mishra

      Thank you Avinash. Yes, indeed it is. 🙂