Motherhood: Haiku

broken motherhood


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[dropcap]A[/dropcap] [highlight]Haiku[/highlight] is a Japanese poem traditionally comprising of seventeen syllables, in three lines of ‘five’, ‘seven’, and ‘five’, which evokes natural images, now a days referred to as [highlight]#micropoetry[/highlight]. But, my Haiku is a new adaptation of the traditional one as I have portrayed the complex human emotions instead of the beauty of nature.

broken motherhood
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Thee scratched my soul, pulled

the umbilical cord harsh,

Motherhood’s broken.

ย โ€” Sangeeta Mishraย 

  • DEESHANI BATRA (DB)

    Beautiful lines…loved it ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Thank you so much dear Deeshani. Glad that you liked it. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • Leena Walawalkar

    Short and sweet they say! Beautifully penned..

    • Thank you so much Leena. Glad that you liked it. Welcome to TSS. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • Purba Chakraborty

    Beautiful, profound and thought-provoking ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Thank you so much dear Purba. Glad that you liked it. Feels great when comes from you. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • Chaitali Bhattacharjee

    Hmmmm tearing the unbroken bond…good one

    • Thank you so much. Glad you liked it Chaitali. Welcome to TSS. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • Meera

    wonderful!

  • RAJEEV KUMAR JHA

    bahut sundar haiku.

    • Thank you so much Mr. Rajeev. Glad you liked it. Welcome to TSS. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • Loved it.. Had seen this one I fb as well and commented ๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Thank you so much Archana. You are a sweetheart. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • Motherhood was broken – a mother was born ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Indeed Somali. A mother was born and the journey of emotional breakages continues. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • Matheikal

    Beautiful. Poignant and deeply meaningful.

    • Thank you so much. It’s really great being read and appreciated by you. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • That is physical separation otherwise motherhood continues. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Truly said Indrani. But it’s suggestive of emotional separation from parents being hurt by children, still motherhood continues. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • Entire meaning of Motherhood is depicted in this Haiku Maitreni ๐Ÿ™‚ Beautifully penned with an emotional touch.