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The picture of Gangotri (Gomukh, the origin of the holy Ganga) was clicked 4 years ago during my Kedarnath (Uttarakhand) visit.

 

~ Haiku ~                                                                            ~ Haiku ~


 

What is in a shape?
Rapid stream hasn’t any
yet it builds many.

Zephyr shapes sand dunes,
The flowing water shapes stones,
Love can shape future.

Sangeeta Mishra

Shared with Haiku Horizons: prompt ‘shape

Haiku is a Japanese poem traditionally comprising of seventeen syllables, in three lines of ‘five’, ‘seven’, and ‘five’, which evokes natural images.

  • Purba Chakraborty

    Beautiful haiku. So profound and true. Love has the power to shape the future 🙂

    • Thank you so much Purba. Glad that you liked it. Means much! 🙂

  • Amit Agarwal

    Both are wonderful..I loved the first one though:)

  • Yogi Saraswat

    Beautiful words , from where you get this beautiful pic ? last line is so true

    • Thank you so much Mr. Saraswat. This picture of ‘Gangotri’ is part of my family album, and was clicked by my brother in 2011 from Kedarnath base.

  • Jyotirmoy Sarkar

    Very nicely written,
    But….sometime love also misshapes the future,

    • I know what you are trying to say. But mere pampering is not called love. True love incorporates discipline and it never harms anyone. 🙂 Well thank you for commenting. 🙂

  • Yes so true… such is the power of love.

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