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सपनों की सरहद,

उस पार मेरी ख़्वाहिशें

इस पार ख़ालीपन!

— संगीता मिश्रा

Haiku is a Japanese poem traditionally comprising of seventeen syllables, in three lines of ‘five’, ‘seven’, and ‘five’, which evokes natural images, now a days referred to as #micropoetry.

  • Thank you Mr. Dasari. Glad that you liked it. 🙂

  • Rakesh Pandey

    It’s beautiful!

  • lovely attempt..

  • Beautiful ..there is always a gap between reality and desires,

    • Thank you so much Somali. Well said Haiku Queen. 🙂

      • My pleasure Sangeeta. But, no titles please because that there’s not much scope for improving…which is hardly the case… 🙂

        • That’s so modest of you Somali. But I seriously mean it. 🙂

  • yogi Saraswat

    बहुत खूब !!

  • Ranjana Shankar

    Wonderful! The contrasts !

  • Nice poem

  • Just wonderful!! Bahut hi sundar, ma’am… 🙂

    • Thank you so much Maniparna. It feels great when appreciated by you, the Haiku queen. 🙂

  • Waah! Short but how true !

  • Nice one 🙂

  • behad sundar Sangeeta ji !

  • Datta Ghosh

    the last line took my heart away

    • Thank you so much. Glad that it could make such impact upon you. 🙂

  • Bahut hi khoobsurat, Sangeeta Ji. Seedhe dil me baith gayee 🙂

    • Thank you so much Ravish. Your appreciation means a lot to me. 🙂

  • ah sundar… a stark reality of life… hai na Sangeetaji? 🙂

    • Yes, indeed Archana. Glad that you liked it. Thanks a lot. 🙂

  • So poignant!

  • Thank you Sangeeta ji. You are always an inspiration for me. With TSS I am being introduced to #Haiku.

    Sometimes thoughts are so spontaneous that you are bound to note those thoughts.

    Here is my Haiku for the same photo.

    ज़मीन तो बंट गई
    आसमां ही बचा है मेरे
    हसीं आशियाने को।

    • Thanks for the needless credits Mr. Parashar. I’m glad that you liked my work, still it’s your eminence which made you learn great. I’m no one to be given undue importance.
      Well, your Haiku is simply superb for the picture.Thanks for sharing. 🙂

  • Good one.