Some questions are tough to be asked than answered
Some dreams are meant to be shattered
Some prayers are offered, listened
But remain unanswered.
Clouds— deadly and dark, do suffocate at times
But it never rains,
The sun rises, yet refuses to shine
So, the fog sustains.
Life goes on and on…
But some moments need a pause,
No matter how beautiful life seems
Happiness comes with a condition or a clause.
Some tears remain stuck in eyes
And restrained to be shed
Ice of melancholy freezes smile
And the warmth of love is ceased to spread.
Some affinities are to be cherished forever,
Still abandoned for trivial reasons.
Some souls— selfless, altruistic
Are at times being snaffled of their visions!
Life goes on and on…
And I go wiser seeing people changing with seasons…
— Sangeeta Mishra
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Thank you so much Mandira 🙂
learning is a never ending process, each experience taught us something, nice composition
Thank you so much for appreciating the composition. Glad that you liked it. 🙂
Lovely emotions raw and vulnerable essayed with imagery.
Thank you so much for your kind words Chaitali. A very warm welcome on TSS 🙂
Hello
Firstly very superbly written and very touching
Wishing you a Very Happy New Year and blessed 2016 ahead 🙂
Keep smiling 🙂
Hello Mr. Shah,
Thank you so much for appreciating
A very happy new year to you too. Thanks once again for stopping by. 🙂
So well said.. So much learning.. Great Poetical Lines!
Thank you so much Mr. Bhattram. Glad that you liked them. 🙂
Poignant yet beautiful and inspiring. You have done magic with your words. Superb, Sangeeta Ji 🙂
Thank you so much Ravish. Being appreciated by you has always been a great pleasure for me.Glad that you liked. 🙂
Life teaches us a lot. Well said through these lines.
Thank you so much Indrani. Glad that you liked them. 🙂
Happy new year 2016…wish u a year filled with success n joy 🙂
Thank you so much Ananya. Wish you too a Very Happy & Prosperous New Year. 🙂
beautiful and poignant ! Its the ‘tears stuck in eyes’,which are restrained that are the most painful .. but life goes on making us wiser .. So True !
Thanks a lot Kokila. Yes, even the feeling is painful, but life shows us many facets, many colours of it. Glad that you liked my poem. 🙂 <3
I especially loved the 2nd verse. Such a profound truth of life beautifully expressed. Loved the poem, Ma’am 🙂 <3
Thank you so much Purba. Even it’s my favorite too. Glad that you liked the poem. Means a lot dear. 🙂 <3
This is so powerful and thought provoking, Ma’am.. It’s always wise to accept the reality and getting used to it than living in dreams with infinite expectations from life.
So mature and very well said Deeshani. You have explained the gist of this poem in such a little words. Glad that you liked it. Thank you so much for the appreciation. 🙂
An individual is the reason of own melancholia or happiness.
Let’s take an example of simple, bright, plane mirror- it reflects the object based on the property it holds. As it is simple, bright & plane mirror so it will reflect object beautifully.
Now take another example of convex or concave mirror- if any object comes infornt of these two kinds of mirror, they reflected very odd. Objects reflected are not in their actual dimension. But both types of mirror holds special property that far object can be seen near and near object can be seen far respectively in convex and concave mirror. So this is natural phenomenon, means one person who looks like prince, having money, lavishness and all comforts may or may not posses internal characteristics of emotional quotient, relation quotient, one’s value, etc. Inversely, like one person is not like prince and other facilities may hold special properties like convex and concave mirror.
So my point is- we are the mirror of our own characteristics. If we see world painful then our surrounding will look painful, our own people will look like pain producing agent. Similarly, if our mind mirror is happy, optimistic, fueled with positive thoughts then our surrounding and own people will look a like.
I just want to convey good message thru my comment.
I like all your poem.
Take care
Nice philosophy of life. Seems you derive inspirations from all walks of life, specially theories of science and nature. Glad to see your maturity and insight. Thank you so much for this detailed comment of yours about life.
Your views mean a lot to us.
Keep sharing. 🙂
God bless.