A Haiku is a Japanese poem traditionally comprising of seventeen syllables, in three lines of ‘five’, ‘seven’, and ‘five’, which evokes natural images. My Haiku is a new adaptation of the traditional one, as I have tried to portray complex human emotions instead of the beauty of nature.
Thee scratched my soul, pulled
the umbilical cord harsh,
Motherhood’s broken.
— Sangeeta Mishra
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Beautiful lines…loved it 🙂
Thank you so much dear Deeshani. Glad that you liked it. 🙂
Short and sweet they say! Beautifully penned..
Thank you so much Leena. Glad that you liked it. Welcome to TSS. 🙂
Beautiful, profound and thought-provoking 🙂
Thank you so much dear Purba. Glad that you liked it. Feels great when comes from you. 🙂
Hmmmm tearing the unbroken bond…good one
Thank you so much. Glad you liked it Chaitali. Welcome to TSS. 🙂
wonderful!
Thank you so much Meera 🙂
bahut sundar haiku.
Thank you so much Mr. Rajeev. Glad you liked it. Welcome to TSS. 🙂
Loved it.. Had seen this one I fb as well and commented ?
Thank you so much Archana. You are a sweetheart. 🙂
Motherhood was broken – a mother was born 🙂
Indeed Somali. A mother was born and the journey of emotional breakages continues. 🙂
Beautiful. Poignant and deeply meaningful.
Thank you so much. It’s really great being read and appreciated by you. 🙂
That is physical separation otherwise motherhood continues. 🙂
Truly said Indrani. But it’s suggestive of emotional separation from parents being hurt by children, still motherhood continues. 🙂
Entire meaning of Motherhood is depicted in this Haiku Maitreni 🙂 Beautifully penned with an emotional touch.
Thank you so much Mr. Dasari. 🙂