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A spirited mind
with constant kinetic hands
Life is a live clock
Life is a live clock,
a synchronized clash to win
the trial of time
The trial of time
withstood by the human clones
Convicted ticking clocks
— Sangeeta Mishra
Shared with Haiku Horizons: Prompt— ‘Clock’
A Haiku is a Japanese poem traditionally comprising of seventeen syllables, in three lines of ‘five’, ‘seven’, and ‘five’, which evokes natural images
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Wow, a beautiful Renga… 🙂 Life is a live clock- this is just a profound thought!
Thank you so much Maniparna for letting me know it’s name. I didn’t know about Renga before. Googled it after reading this comment of your’s. You are indeed a Haiku school. Thanks for you liked it. 🙂 <3
Loved the idea of beginning with the last line of the previous haiku. Like a relay race! Loved each one of them! Profound!
Thank you Rakeshji. Glad that you liked it. I had came to know from Maniparna that this type of Haiku is called Renga or Renku. 🙂
It’s lovely. I didn’t know its name. You are a pro when it comes to poetry! Really!
Thanks again. I’m humbled. Really means a lot!
Wow beautiful description .. wonderful
I enjoyed reading it
Thanks for sharing
And wishing you a wonderful day ahead 🙂
Thank you Bhavik. Glad that you liked it. Wish you too a great weekend:)
Profound and beautiful 🙂
Thank you so much Ravish. Glad that you liked it. 🙂
Good one… imaginations expressed well.
Thank you Indrani. Glad that you liked it. 🙂
Nice composition. ‘Convicted ticking clocks’, a nice weave of words
Thank you so much. Glad that you liked it. 🙂
lovely haiku
Thank you so much.
Life is a live clock…what an amazing thought! Brilliant 🙂
Thank you Purba. Glad that you liked it. Means a lot when comes from you. 🙂
liked the haiku, and liked the word “withstood”—this is what i always love to do with time.,.
Thank you Jyotirmoy. That’s really a smart move. Glad that you liked the haiku. 🙂
Truly a vivid and apt imagination dear 🙂
Thank you Roma. Glad that you liked it. 🙂