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Rebuttal: Haiku

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rebuttal of buds

I found the diligence of nature in the newly bloomed banana tree in my garden.

Haiku                                                                                       Haiku

Intrepid blossoms

Amidst contradicting hue

Demure diligence

Sangeeta Mishra

Haiku is a Japanese poem traditionally comprising of seventeen syllables, in three lines of ‘five’, ‘seven’, and ‘five’, which evokes natural images, now a days referred to as #micropoetry.

  • The contrast of words in the last line is great…lovely!

  • MS Mahwar

    Beautiful Haiku!

  • Thank you Deeshani. Glad that you liked it. Means much. 🙂

  • Thank you so much Indrani. 🙂

  • Thanks Anjali. 🙂

  • nice haiku accompanying beautiful image

    • Thank you so kuch. Glad that you liked it. Means a lot. 🙂

  • Chaitali Bhattacharjee

    Good interplay of words.

  • Nice one Sangeeta, the flowers show a hidden brightness behind all that foliage of green..

    • Thanks Vinay. Glad that you liked the picture, and described it so beautifully. 🙂

  • Purba Chakraborty

    I loved the words that you have chosen for this haiku, Ma’am.
    “Demure audacity” sounds so beautiful.

    • Thank you Purba. I’m so glad that you liked the Haiku and the words selection. Means a lot. 🙂

  • Saru

    Beautiful haiku. Do share the picture of the tree when it’s fruit laden.

    • Thank you Saru. I surely will and even try to write something about that too. 🙂

  • A very beautifully written Haiku, with deep meaning hidden in it. Thank you for sharing this Sangeeta ji :))

    • Thank you so much Mr. Dasari. Glad that you liked the Haiku. 🙂

  • and what a beautiful audacity it is 🙂

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