सुबह के इंतज़ार में, गुज़री तमाम रात
आँखों-ही-आँखो में यूँ कटी तमाम रात
दर-ओ-दीवार कुछ यूं, रौशन थे कल मेरे
शमा की तरह खुद मैं, जली तमाम रात
महफ़िल में यूँ तो सबने, छेड़े मेरे नग़मे
कहानी रह गई थी अनसुनी तमाम रात
सोचा, शहर में होंगे, कल मेरे भी चर्चे
बेेसब्रियाँ काटे से ना कटतीं तमाम रात
लफ़्जों को बन्दिशों में सजा लिया तो क्या
नासाज़ रह गई थी, मौसिक़ी तमाम रात
उम्मीदों को बुलाया था कुछ उम्मीद से
हाथ आई महज़ नाउम्मीदगी तमाम रात
सहरा में बनाये थे, जो रेत के महल
गुज़री वहीं से भूली-बिसरी तमाम रात
मायूसियों को जी भर सफ़हे पे उतारा
अल्फाज़ ने की ग़म-गुसारी तमाम रात
होता जो मुझमे थोड़ा भी कहने का हुनर
रहती नहीं “संगीता” अनकही तमाम रात !
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For an insomniac like me, it’s bliss to experience the dawn first before the whole world does. However, as all good things come with a price, I pay it with those sleepless nights draped with melancholy, yet crave fame out of that. Here, the bewildered insomniac expresses her gloom through this Ghazal.
— संगीता मिश्रा
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है यकीं मुझको की सच्चे है तेरे वादे, सच्ची तेरी हर बात इसीलिए अब भी तेरे इंतजार में है मेरी तमाम रात !
Wah, kya baat kahi hai! Beautiful lines! Thank you so much for adding aesthetics to my Ghazal. And welcome to TSS Mr. Dubey. 🙂
OMG! This is beautiful beyond words. Gulzar Sahab ki yaad aa gaye!
If such comments come from Saru, the queen of “WORDS”, that’s really mean something. For me your ‘Words’ mean a lot either ways– be it your compliment or your poetry. Thanks a lot Saru. 🙂
Thank you so much !
Mera toh har din aise hi gujarta hai…
Bahot hi sundar peshkash sangeeta Ji.
Hehe,
Din to sabhi ke yise hi guzarte hain.
Mushkil to tab hai jab tabah hoti tamam raat…..
Well, jokes apart… Thank you so much Jyotirmoy. Tareef ke liye baut shukriya. 🙂
wow… I have no words to express… so beautiful… 🙂
Thank you so much Archana. Glad that you liked it. 🙂
शानदार ग़ज़ल !!
Thank you so much. Tareef ka Shukriya.
Very beautiful Gazal Sangeeta….Tamaam Raat, what a nice word!!
Thank you so much. Glad that you liked it. Welcome to TSS.
Beautiful ghazal. It’s sad but close to reality
Thank you so much Mr. Kishor. Yes it is !
Very well written.
One rarely gets good Hindi stuffs to read these days. Keep writing out like these.
Thank you so much Indrani. Glad that you liked it. Means a lot. I’ll surely try. 🙂
So beautiful 🙂 Such a wonderful ghazal. loved reading it 🙂
Thank you so much Purba. Glad that you liked it. Means much. 🙂 <3
It’s too good! Loved the last sher! You should write more ghazals!
Thank you so much Rakesh ji. Means a lot when comes from you. Sure! I would definitely try writing more. 🙂
Beautiful Ghazal SangeetaJi.
Thank you so much Jyothi. Glad that you liked it. 🙂
Bahut khub,
Thank you so much. Tareef ka shukriya. 🙂
Sorry that’s Bahut
Yes, I know Chaitali. It happens with me too. 🙂
Bantu khub
Thank you Chaitali. Glad that you liked it. 🙂
Bahut hi khoobsurat rachna hai… 🙂
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Thank you so much. Tareef ka shukriya. 🙂
Bohot sundar. Chalo raat bhar jaagne par ghazal hi padhne ko mil jaati hai… 🙂
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Thank you Aparna. Aur raat bhar jagne per aap jaise tareef kerne wale bhi to milte hain. 🙂
behtreen ghazal,
meri nazaron ko jo padh gaye tum,
khuli kitaab si rahin ye nazre tamam raat
Tareef ke liye hukriya.
Apke is sher ne meri Ghazal ko bilkul berang ker diya. Very beautiful! It adds aesthetics to my ghazal.
Agar padh leti pehle main apka yeh sher,
Zaya na kerti gazal keh ker, apni tamam raat.