तमाम रात : Ghazal

तमाम रात
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It’s bliss for an insomniac like me to experience the dawn first, before the whole world does. But as all good things come with a price, I pay it with those sleepless nights draped with melancholy; yet the opportunist me craves fame out of that. Here, the bewildered insomniac expresses her gloom through this Ghazal.

तमाम रात
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Ghazal ~                                                                                         ~ Ghazal 


 

सुबह के  इंतज़ार में गुज़री तमाम रात,

आँखों-ही-आँखों में कटी तमाम रात |

 

दरो-दीवार मेरे कल बड़े  ही रौशन थे,

शमा बनकर मैं ख़ुद जली तमाम रात |

 

मुझसे पूछे बिना कहे-सुने मेरे किस्से,

मैं रह गयी कहानी अनसुनी, तमाम रात |

 

सुबह तक होंगे मशहूर मेरे ही चर्चे,

सोचकर, काटे से न कट रही तमाम रात |

 

मुस्कुराने की जो की नाकाम सी कोशिश,

कि सिसकियों में ही सिमट गयी तमाम रात |

 

बड़ी उम्मीद से बुलाया था उम्मीदों को,

मगर नाउम्मीदगी से भरी तमाम रात |

 

अँधेरे पलों में बनाए जो रेत के महल,

वहीँ से गुज़री, भूली-बिसरी तमाम रात |

 

लाख मायूसियों के बाद लिखी जो ग़ज़ल,

वो रह गयी अधूरी-अनकही तमाम रात |

— संगीता मिश्रा 

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  • Pritesh Dubey

    है यकीं मुझको की सच्चे है तेरे वादे, सच्ची तेरी हर बात इसीलिए अब भी तेरे इंतजार में है मेरी तमाम रात !

    • Wah, kya baat kahi hai! Beautiful lines! Thank you so much for adding aesthetics to my Ghazal. And welcome to TSS Mr. Dubey. 🙂

  • Saru

    OMG! This is beautiful beyond words. Gulzar Sahab ki yaad aa gaye!

    • If such comments come from Saru, the queen of “WORDS”, that’s really mean something. For me your ‘Words’ mean a lot either ways– be it your compliment or your poetry. Thanks a lot Saru. 🙂

  • Thank you so much !

  • Jyotirmoy Sarkar

    Mera toh har din aise hi gujarta hai…
    Bahot hi sundar peshkash sangeeta Ji.

    • Hehe,
      Din to sabhi ke yise hi guzarte hain.
      Mushkil to tab hai jab tabah hoti tamam raat…..

      Well, jokes apart… Thank you so much Jyotirmoy. Tareef ke liye baut shukriya. 🙂

  • wow… I have no words to express… so beautiful… 🙂

  • yogi saraswat

    शानदार ग़ज़ल !!

  • Hemant Arora

    Very beautiful Gazal Sangeeta….Tamaam Raat, what a nice word!!

    • Thank you so much. Glad that you liked it. Welcome to TSS.

  • Beautiful ghazal. It’s sad but close to reality

  • Indrani

    Very well written.
    One rarely gets good Hindi stuffs to read these days. Keep writing out like these.

    • Thank you so much Indrani. Glad that you liked it. Means a lot. I’ll surely try. 🙂

  • Purba Chakraborty

    So beautiful 🙂 Such a wonderful ghazal. loved reading it 🙂

    • Thank you so much Purba. Glad that you liked it. Means much. 🙂 <3

  • Rakesh Pandey

    It’s too good! Loved the last sher! You should write more ghazals!

    • Thank you so much Rakesh ji. Means a lot when comes from you. Sure! I would definitely try writing more. 🙂

  • Jyothi D’mello

    Beautiful Ghazal SangeetaJi.

  • Datta Ghosh

    Bahut khub,

  • Chaitali Bhattacharjee

    Sorry that’s Bahut

  • Chaitali Bhattacharjee

    Bantu khub

  • Bahut hi khoobsurat rachna hai… 🙂

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  • Bohot sundar. Chalo raat bhar jaagne par ghazal hi padhne ko mil jaati hai… 🙂
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    • Thank you Aparna. Aur raat bhar jagne per aap jaise tareef kerne wale bhi to milte hain. 🙂

  • behtreen ghazal,

    meri nazaron ko jo padh gaye tum,
    khuli kitaab si rahin ye nazre tamam raat

    • Tareef ke liye hukriya.
      Apke is sher ne meri Ghazal ko bilkul berang ker diya. Very beautiful! It adds aesthetics to my ghazal.

      Agar padh leti pehle main apka yeh sher,
      Zaya na kerti gazal keh ker, apni tamam raat.