When she was born, everyone said that she didn’t look like me! But, I made her my replica with time. 🙂 This poem is dedicated to my daughter Maitreni.
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जब तुम आई, कहा सबने
मेरा अक्स नहीं दिखता तुममें |
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मुस्कान तुम्हारी मुझ सी नहीं
और आँखों में थे भाव नए,
मैंने ओढ़ ली वो नन्ही सी किरण
और दिल के सारे घाव भरे |
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आँसू ये तुम्हारे हिस्से के
अब मेरी आँखों से बहते
तुम बोलो और मै निःशब्द
मेरे शब्द तुम्हारे स्वर में ढ़ले |
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तुम मुझमें थी, अब मै तुममें
मेरा अक्स मै देखूँ अब तुममें |
— संगीता
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Thank you so much. 🙂
How sweet! 🙂
Thank you so much 🙂
Lovely lines.
Thanks. Glad that you liked them. 🙂
yet another lovely composition..I relate to your mother’s emotions so so much dear 🙂
Thank you so much Roma. A mother’s emotions are always the same, no matter what generation she belongs to. 🙂
Beautiful lines for a beautiful daughter. Very nice.
Thank you so much Chandan. 🙂
Wonderful lines for the daughter. 🙂
Thank you so much Indrani. It’s my pleasure that you liked them. 🙂
Aww! So heart touching & mesmerizing word.. No doubt your daughter is your replica 🙂
Thank you so much Anjali. Glad that you liked my words. Welcome to TSS. 🙂
Very nice and touching poem Sangeeta. A lovely bond. 🙂
Thank you so much Indrani. Glad that you liked. 🙂
So lovely!
Thank you so much 🙂
Very Beautiful 🙂
Thank you so much. 🙂
This is so so so heart touching! Treat to read such a wonderful poem for a daughter from a mother. Love you both! Keep smiling always <3 🙂
Aww…Thanks a lot Purba. Your appreciation means a lot to us and your presence on TSS is indeed the most special thing we could ever get. Love you Baby. 🙂
O she is your complete replica and delightfully so… love you both…
and what a beautiful expression this is… 🙂
Aww.. Thanks a lot Archana. We too love you and value your appreciation the most. 🙂
Very true. 🙂
Appreciated. 🙂
Thank you so much Avinash. Means a lot. 🙂