~ Haiku ~ ~ Haiku ~
My sap thought process,
Caged in a complex mind, thus
I locked my instinct.
I locked my feelings,
Thou art possessing the keys,
Ah! Please set me free.
— Sangeeta Mishra
Shared with Haiku Horizons, Prompt: ‘lock’
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Great use of lock, caged, and the motif of setting the emotions ‘free’…..
Thank you so much Sunaina. You have reached the core beneath the words!
Lovely.
Thank you so much!
Awesome 🙂
Thank you Anjali! 🙂
You are hell of a writer. This is crisp and beautiful. Love it 🙂
Thank you so much Saru! You always make me feel overwhelmed with your words. 🙂
Lovely….
Thank you so much!
Awesome it is, especially the second part 🙂
Thank you so much Roma! Glad that you liked it. 🙂
I loved the Shakespearean diction in the second haiku!
Thank you so much Mr. Agarwal!
Beautiful poem
Thank you so much!
Beautiful!
Thank you!
Deep and poignant.
Thank you so much! 🙂
A beautiful composition with so much depth 🙂
Thank you so much Purba! Means a lot! 🙂
Wow! A timeless Picasso piece coupled with such beautiful words.. Such a beautiful combination! 🙂
Thank you so much Bushra! Glad that you liked my words. 🙂
Wonderful!
Thank you so much!