वक़्त ने करवट बदली और आईने बदल गए,
चेहरे के शिकन के संग सारे पैमाने बदल गए |
कुछ इस तरह से रात भर हम लिखते रह गए,
कि सुबह हुई और लफ़्ज़ों के मायने बदल गए |
मीलों चले हम अपनी हसरतों के संग-संग,
हम देखते ही रह गए, वो सामने बदल गए |
स्याही से लिखे हर्फ़, ज़िन्दगी के गीत थे,
सुर सजे रहे मगर अफ़साने बदल गए |
बेघर हमे किया और हुए वो बेखबर,
बेफिक्र कुछ ऐसे कि आशियाने बदल गए |
हवाओं का रूख़ मोड़कर चलने का था जज़्बा,
पर मंज़िलों के भी सभी ठिकाने बदल गए ||
— संगीता
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Thank you so much Rakesh ji. I know it has lots of imperfections. It’s simply the flow of emotions, not a piece of skilled writing. So, you can find lot of metre and other such flaws. And thanks a lot for guiding me to improve it.
I’ve posted many, here on TSS, quite some time back. Most of them are quite old, written during my college days, about 25-30 years back. If you have sometime, please have a look, here
https://www.thestylesymphony.com/category/poetry/hindi-poems/page/2/ and
https://www.thestylesymphony.com/category/poetry/hindi-poems/.
There are still many which I hesitate posting, as I’ve outgrown them and they seem quite childish and immature to me now.
Looking forward to learn more from you. You are an institution. Thanks for gracing TSS. 🙂
each and every line of this poem is a gem… beautiful creation… kya lines hai… maza a gaya…
कुछ इस तरह से हम लिखते रहे रात भर
की सुबह हुई और लफ़्ज़ों के मायने बदल गए |
bahut hi sundar…
Thank you so much Ashish. Your appreciation means a lot. Glad that someone likes Hindi / Urdu poetry in today’s era where Hindi literature is on the verge of extinction. Thanks again. 🙂
behad khoobsurat ! thanks for sharing dear 🙂
Thank you so much dear ^_^
Thank you so much Kokila 🙂
Ye saari koshishein besab na thi phir kyon manzilein ruswa hui…beautifully penned Sangeeta
Thank you so much Bushra. Your appreciation really means a lot. 🙂
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Kavita!
Thank you so much 🙂
Such soulful lines. Beautiful 🙂
Thank you so much Purba 🙂
वाक़ई अच्छा लिखा है आपने.
धन्यवाद !
This is superb.. this is bookmark material.. Awesome!!
Thank you so much.Your appreciation really means a lot. 🙂
Kya baat hai! Kitne sundar lafzon mein andaaz ko bayaan kiya hai aapne Sangeeta.
Dhanyawad Somali. Apke madhur shabdon ke liye anek aabhar ! 🙂
Absolutely wonderful Sangeeta! Thank you Maitreni:)
Thank you so much Amit. 🙂
Wow! You’re a very good poet, Sangeeta. And thanks Maitreni for sharing such beautiful lines. 🙂
Thak you so much Ravish. It feels special being appreciated by literary people like you. 🙂
कुछ इस तरह से हम लिखते रहे रात भर
की सुबह हुई और लफ़्ज़ों के मायने बदल गए |
मीलों चले हम अपनी हसरतों के संग-संग,
हम देखते ही रह गए और वो सामने बदल गए |
सुन्दर अलफ़ाज़
Thank you so much 🙂
That’s the true reality of life.
Super like (Y).
Thank you Avinash. Yes, indeed it is. 🙂