Ethereal Prance: Haiku

raindrops haiku

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Over the rooftop,
Beads of VIBGYOR, jumping on,
Raindrops fluttering

Raindrops fluttering,
As pearls from a broken string,
Jumping on the floor!

Sangeeta Mishra

Shared with : Haiku Horizons, Prompt: ‘Jump’

Haiku is a Japanese poem traditionally comprising of seventeen syllables, in three lines of ‘five’, ‘seven’, and ‘five’, which evokes natural images.

  • Thank you so much Deeshani. Getting drenched in rain is indeed a beautiful idea. 🙂

  • beautifully written, it creates imagery of rain

  • Beautiful!

  • I liked the comparison with pearls. Good one.

    • Thank you so much Indrani. Pearls part is my favorite too. 🙂

  • sunita

    Loved the VIBGYOR..the colours of elements!

  • Divya Srinivasan

    Lovely composition ..

  • MS Mahwar


  • Beautiful Haiku. Comparison with pearls dropping is excellent

    • Thank you so much Mr. Kishor. Glad that you liked it. 🙂

  • Jyotirmoy Sarkar

    Very nice interpretation of rain, loved it.

  • Purba Chakraborty

    Beautiful haiku on rain 🙂