~ Haiku ~ ~ Haiku ~
Over the rooftop,
Beads of VIBGYOR, jumping on,
Raindrops fluttering
Raindrops fluttering,
As pearls from a broken string,
Jumping on the floor!
— Sangeeta Mishra
Shared with : Haiku Horizons, Prompt: ‘Jump’
A Haiku is a Japanese poem traditionally comprising of seventeen syllables, in three lines of ‘five’, ‘seven’, and ‘five’, which evokes natural images.
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Thank you so much Deeshani. Getting drenched in rain is indeed a beautiful idea. 🙂
beautifully written, it creates imagery of rain
Thank you so much. Means a lot !
Beautiful!
Thank you so much Bushra. 🙂
I liked the comparison with pearls. Good one.
Thank you so much Indrani. Pearls part is my favorite too. 🙂
Loved the VIBGYOR..the colours of elements!
Thank you so much Sunita. Glad that you liked it. 🙂
Lovely composition ..
Thank you so much Divya. 🙂
Beautiful!
Beautiful Haiku. Comparison with pearls dropping is excellent
Thank you so much Mr. Kishor. Glad that you liked it. 🙂
Very nice interpretation of rain, loved it.
Thank you so much Jyotirmoy. 🙂
Beautiful haiku on rain 🙂
Thank you so much Purba. 🙂