O’ Life : Haiku

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 ~ Haiku ~                                                                                                           ~ Haiku ~


 

You were not awful
Yet I didn’t live you so
awesomely! O’ Life!

 

O’ Life! Conjuring?
Let me appraise if you are
worth a second chance!

 

  • Great to read.

  • Jayanthi Parthasarathy

    also you are a great photographer – loved the picture with this poem <3

  • Jayanthi Parthasarathy

    It really has a deep meaning……when one has lost a lot many good days to illness, etc one thinks along these lines
    Very Powerful

  • MS Mahwar

    Beautiful!
    worth reading! 🙂

  • Jyotirmoy Sarkar

    Very deep and insightful, though written in English but second stanza made me feel like reading a shayari.
    Yah, i will not give life a second chance…this one was too much.

  • The question is; Is life worth a second chance? Or, we? I mean isn’t it we who shape our lives the way we want. Except for a few uncontrollable instances, of course. I often ponder over this thought: Was it my life that shaped it the way it is now? Or, was it me and my decisions that did it?
    Anyhow, nice haiku. Keep it up!

  • Rakesh Pandey

    Bang on nose!

    Let me assure you that life is not only worth the second, but also third, fourth and 34th chance! It’s worth trying till the last breath. We all make mistakes which make our own lives miserable. In the next round, just be wary of past mistakes and retry. 😀

    Very beautiful haiku, as usual! 👌