अक्स और आँखें


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[dropcap]W[/dropcap]hen she was born,everyone said that she didn’t look like me! But I made her my replica with time. 🙂 This poem is dedicated to my daughter [highlight]Maitreni[/highlight].

IMG_5597जब तुम आई, कहा सबने
मेरा अक्स नहीं दिखता तुममें |

मुस्कान तुम्हारी मुझ सी नहीं
और आँखों में थे भाव नए,
मैंने ओढ़ ली वो नन्ही सी किरण
और दिल के सारे घाव भरे |

आँसू ये तुम्हारे हिस्से के
अब मेरी आँखों से बहते
तुम बोलो और मै निःशब्द
मेरे शब्द तुम्हारे स्वर में ढ़ले |

तुम मुझमें थी, अब मै तुममें
मेरा अक्स मै देखूँ अब तुममें |

— संगीता

  • Thank you so much. 🙂

  • How sweet! 🙂

  • kashpals

    Lovely lines.

  • yet another lovely composition..I relate to your mother’s emotions so so much dear 🙂

    • Thank you so much Roma. A mother’s emotions are always the same, no matter what generation she belongs to. 🙂

  • Beautiful lines for a beautiful daughter. Very nice.

  • Wonderful lines for the daughter. 🙂

    • Thank you so much Indrani. It’s my pleasure that you liked them. 🙂

  • Anjali Sengar

    Aww! So heart touching & mesmerizing word.. No doubt your daughter is your replica 🙂

    • Thank you so much Anjali. Glad that you liked my words. Welcome to TSS. 🙂

  • Very nice and touching poem Sangeeta. A lovely bond. 🙂

  • Rakesh Pandey

    So lovely!

  • MS Mahwar

    Very Beautiful 🙂

  • Purba Chakraborty

    This is so so so heart touching! Treat to read such a wonderful poem for a daughter from a mother. Love you both! Keep smiling always <3 🙂

    • Aww…Thanks a lot Purba. Your appreciation means a lot to us and your presence on TSS is indeed the most special thing we could ever get. Love you Baby. 🙂

  • O she is your complete replica and delightfully so… love you both…
    and what a beautiful expression this is… 🙂

    • Aww.. Thanks a lot Archana. We too love you and value your appreciation the most. 🙂

  • Avinash Mishra

    Very true. 🙂

    Appreciated. 🙂